urbfilms's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Book 10]

This is probably my favorite animation that you've made, it was wonderfully animated and written.
This series was pulled off really well! I can tell you that I definitely wasn't expecting this ending. Nice job, man!

Dayonder responds:

Well it's nice to know my tedious month of straight animating was worth it. Thanks! :D

[Crazy Substitute Teachers]

Yo, did you get back access of your account? Or is this account still being run by the phony Jaiden Animations?
Either way, the video was great, so here hAVE 5 STARS.

JaidenAnimations responds:

lol im real now hey there

[Antisocial Interactions]

The animation for this is really good, but not only does this excel in animation, but also in story telling. This is probably my favorite cartoon that you've made so far, because the story really builds up, and then has a payoff. Great job, Dayonder!

Dayonder responds:

Ya really think so? I would say this is probably my least story-driven animation. But thanks!

[Only the Happy Thoughts]

This is really good! You're really good at making your cartoons feel like an experience.
The jokes were funny, the animation was smooth, and the colors were nice! Great job!
I'm looking forward to what you make next!

jlorp responds:

Eh, I sort of wish I'd have picked a more vibrant color pallet, but thanks <3 I appreciate it

[Stern & Freeman]

This was very well made! While the art style is a little simplistic, and there isn't a whole lot of shading, I'm not really gonna hold that against you because this is a very long animation (five minutes? Holy crap! That's a lot of lip sync)! The dialogue was very interesting to listen to, and this was overall very good writing. Great job! I look forward to seeing more from you!

sadakab responds:

Hey thanks so much! What a kick-ass review :) I look forward to improving the complexity as I go on for sure, this one's a big step up from the first one.

[School Animations: 2014]

I must say, great artwork, and great use of color! Although, I would have preferred it if you fully animated health insurance. Also, for the other ones, I noticed your heavy use of tweens, and gradients. However, it was probably because you had a severe deadline, as you said in the description.
Great job! You made school animations more interesting!
Also, pretty great music choice! Although, I'd avoid uploading these animations on YouTube because of their Content ID thing going on.

MistyE responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Gronch Animated Christmas]

I enjoyed this. The characters were nice, and fully animated, and I especially liked the perspective in the frames. I can tell you put some time into this, as it's frame by frame. Also, the backgrounds were quite nice. Just one piece of advice, though, the first thing your eyes go to when starting this film is the head of the Grinch. And the head isn't shaded, and, while I realize that you shaded the body, and Max, the head of the Grinch isn't shaded, and would be nice if it was. Good job!

VortexVisionz responds:

Thanks man im glad you enjoyed this. I made this cartoon a couple of years ago so I have improved alot with my newer work. I will consider shading my characters though since it does seem to atract the eye a bit more. Thanks again

[GameGrumps: Punch Out]

Not bad, I liked it! The art style was quite nice, and the moment you chose was amusing! Try fully animating it next time, though. I'm not sure if it'll ruin the "Game Grumps Animated" feel, but it would be nice. Also, you should try shading the characters in the foreground. I noticed that you shaded the characters in the background, but not in the foreground. It'll add depth to the characters. The art style was enough for me to really enjoy this, though! I'm adding you to my favorites!

pandapandas responds:

thank you for the feedback!
i will try the shading next time :d

[PS4 vs XBOX ONE]

Well, it's not bad, but the audio quality was really an issue. I think I know the problem, though. In Flash, click - File- Publish Settings- and change it so that Audio Stream and Audio event say: MP3, 160 kbps, Stereo. Without it, audio will sound very muffled
Also, try experimenting with colors more, and try to make them look interesting. Try shading objects more, and try getting out of your comfort zone!
Not a bad effort at all! Keep improving!

nuclearacid responds:

Thank you, i've been wondering how to impove audio quallity.

[The Client's Always Right]

I've never seen anything quite like this before. It was very unique, and I really enjoyed watching it!
The voice acting was great, and the voices fit the characters very well I might add, the animation was smooth, and the art style was unique! The story was nice and simple to understand, and I just really loved this! The color choice was also very easy on the eyes!

I really have to give you kudos for this! This was great!

Gerkinman responds:

Hey thanks, im glad you enjoyed it! Im still very proud of this piece!